ranya

i do not know kanya if u will like this nat twist in pure ran kan luv story or not...but i thought that sum twist is neccesary or else our kit would too become boring like ekta's one....but to tell u the truth this week's kit episodes r really funny...i hope u lik my ideas....akhir main hum bichhare hui sisters ja hai...ha!!!ha!!!


and other friends plz contribute......we will reallyy luv to see many more interesting twists.....

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xoxo_angeldevil_xoxo

oooooooohhhhh............!!!!!!! its good!

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mannie1

i will miss u a lot ranya. please make some time. u r like the star of this forum

mannie1

if you would like i would luv to continue on also if u like i would start pretty soon

kanyakumari

Hi Ranya! was so happy to read ur break ke baad!
Ya this week KIT is back to old note! with Kanya realising her luv for ranbir.... May be Ekta read our posts and version ..... she should keep on reading ours so that she won't go off the track!

But if u know they r not going to admit to each other about their luv. they will continue like this. now Ranbir is going by Aditybhaiya's direction... just like Kanya was going by Shanta, Pooja and Chunnu's! but it is fine! as long as they luv each other.... I don't mind waiting for ages .... only thing is the story should move on now with interesting turns and twists......

Reva being Natasha.... Ranbir's guess is so funny... but there should be ultimate comedy !!!

My next episode will be back soon....

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kanyakumari

At the farm house : Kanya on bed : unconscious. Ran sitting next to her. Doctor examining her

Episode 6 :
Doc : Don't worry Mr. Nanda maine injection de diya hai. She will be OK in 10 Min.
Ran : but isse hua kya hai?
Doc : mere khayalse shaayad woh kisi cheejse dar gayi hogi
Ran : aisi to koi baat nahi thi
Doc : to phir Hypoglycemia hoga....

Doc leaves.
Ran calls his doctor friend in AIIMS, Delhi
Ran : Hi Aakash! It's Ranbir
Dr. Aakash: Hi. Ranbir Yaar, tu to b'bay ja ke humein bhool hi gaya. Kya baat hai ? how r u?
Ran : i am fine. Actually meri wife ki problem hai
Dr Aakash: Hey! i heard that u got married! who is this lucky one? and what's her problem?

Ran looking at Kanya explains, Kan is moving her head and eyeballs. Her lips get separated and again she shakes her head.......Ran goes close to her and holds her hand!

Dr Aakash: Ranbir I give u my friend's cell no. he is a Neurologist at B'bay Hospital. Just go and see him tomorrow.
Ran : do u feel this is something serious?
Dr Aakash: see Ranbir, some times some smaller things turn out to be grave. It's better to rule out everything. Aur phir ab to medical science aur technology itne advanced ho gaye hai....
Ran : Aakash, tell me yeh kuch serious hai kya. y r u talking all this?

Dr. Aakash : Ranbir, yaar tu to poora change ho gaya hai. I just can't believe that it's u. I know yaar. Pyaar mein yeh sab hota hai. don't worry. Bhabhi ko kuchh nahi hoga par kal tu B'bay hospital zaroor ja. i'll phone my friend now!
ok! Bye! I'll get back to u, ok!

Kanya is coming back to senses! Ran calls her
Kanya.... Kanya.....Chipkhali...he puts his hand in her hair, Kanya , aankhe kholo na! muze darr lag raha hai ab!
Oh Mrs. Ranbir Nanda, Please ...
She opens her eyes!!!
Kan :Ranbir, kya baat hai? Hum kaha hain? hum to club gaye the na?
Ran just takes her in his arms. Kitna bolti ho. Chup ho jaao. his eyes r watering.
Kan : kya hua? tumhari aankhomein paani? Ranbir kya baat hai?
Ran : Kuchh nahi . par waapas iss tarahse muze pareshaan kiya to dekhna. chhodunga nahi main tumhein!
Kan : Par muze kya hua tha? mera sir bahut bhaari hai aur chhakkar sa bhi ho raha hai! Kya hua hai muze?
Ran : HYPOGLYCEMIA
Kan : yeh kaunsi beemari hai?

Ran : Yeh beemari nahi hai. Husband ko taklif deneka bahana hai. Kuchh khati, peeti nahi aur phir kumjorise chaakkar aati hai tumhe! Kya kahenge tumhare mummy papa ki main tumhara koi khayaal hi nahi rakhta! kitna kaha tha subah theekse khao par sunti kaha ho?
Kan : arre! kitna gussa ho? kya lecture de rahe ho?
Ran : to kya karu? Itna dara deti ho!
Kan : Tumhe kya laga main mar jaungi?
Ran puts his hand on her mouth
Ran : Chup kar! waapas aisi baat ki na...(takes her in his arms). Kanya, kal hum ek achhe doctor ke paas jayenge!
Kan : r u mad? muze kuchh nahi hua hai. arre hum yehan 3 din pyaarmein gujarne aye hai aur tum...
Ran : tum kuchh nahi bologi. kal humein jaana hai
Kan : par Mummy papane to dikhaya tha doctor ko
Ran : Kya?
Kan : Ha! woh bhi keh rahe the mein kamzor hu. actually Vitamin ki goliya bhi khaneko di thi. Par main woh bhool ayi ghar pe!

Ran looks at her. tumne muze bataaya nahi.
Kan : ab bata rahi hu na! muze kuchh nahi hua hai. Tumhen muzse itni jaldi chhutkara thodehi milega? don't worry ranbir. agar tum chahate ho to yehanse jaaneke baad hum doc se mileng. par kal nahi. Muze tumhare saath akelemein wakt gujarna hai. kafi saari batei karani hai... ek baar wapas gaye to phir se woh Shantatai, ....Reva bhabhi....saari paltan. humein privacy hi nahi milegi

Ran : achha to aapko privacy chhahiye? kya karegi aap?
Kan blushes...nahi mere keheneka matlub woh nahi tha.
Ran : to kya tha?
Kan : (still blushing) bas tumhare saath rehena hai. achha lagata hai. peheli baar kuchh alag mehesoos kar rahi hu. darr bhi lagata hai... sakoon bhi lagata hai....khushi hoti hai... aur aankhe bhar aati hai.... Ranbir, kya issi ko pyaar kehete hai? ( looks into his eyes)
Ran : Main to iss mamalemein poora anpadh gawar hu. bus itna janata hu, jab tumhare baremein sochta hu to meri bhi aankhe bhar aati hai. tumhare ghar mein bhi akele mein maine kitni baar aasu...
Kan : kya? ... Ranbir, sach keh rahe ho? I just can't believe it.... U love me so much.... ... Maine bhagwan par kabhi wiswas nahi kiya tha. par aaj main karati hu kyon ki ye jo aaj ho raha hai woh bus usiki kripa se ho sakata hai.aur unse bus yeh dua mangti hu ki yeh sab aisehi chalta rahe....... ..She looks down

Next moment she gets up and kisses Ranbir on his lips .... they get lost . Ranbir holds her properly and kisses her ......the kiss continues.....
Tumse hi at the background

Commercial break...........

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xoxo_angeldevil_xoxo

awwwwwwwwwwww.....dat was soooooooooo goooood! continue n btw i will miss u too ranya! urs n kanyakumari's stories r really good!

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xoxo_angeldevil_xoxo

i might add on wen u r not here, but try, we all want u here. btw, kanya u will continue right?? pls

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ranya

hi friends...let me continue it...since i have got sum time.....
after the break..
ran and kan r very close to each other.....and kan puts her head on ranbir's chest...ranbir strokes his hand on her head...
ran:ek baat puchu tumse kanya......
kan:haan pucho na...
ran:woh, us din jab main saari raat ghar nahi lauta...aur lautneke baad tum sabke samne ro rahi thi...kya tum sach mein nataak kar rahi thi??? dekho bilkul saach bolna...tumhe meri kasam..
kan:tumhe kya laga...main nataak kar rahi hu?
ran:nahi...mujhe laga tha ki sayad tum sach main paresan ho...aur tumhare chehere se bhi aisa hi lag raha tha.....lekin tum kahe rahi thi....
kan:tumhe pata hai...us raat main ek pal ke liye bhi nahi so payee...mere mann mein ajeeb ajeeb khayal aa rahe the...sachh kahu to main darr hi gayi thi ki kahin tum mujhe choorke chale toh nahi gaye na...
aur main yeh saari batein pooja di aur shanta tai ko bhi nahi bata pa rahi thi....aisa phir kabhi mat darana...samjhe...
ran:I am sorry...to matlab tum tab se hi mujhse pyar karti thi...
kan:haan....saach kahu to mujhe pata hi nahi chala kab se main tumhe pyar karne kagi......mujhe to lagta hai sayad pehli nazar mein hi main...
ran:KYA????? U mean tumne mera gala pyar se pakra tha....
kan laughes loudly
kan:Aur tum...tum kab se mujhe pyar kar rahe ho....
ran:woh...kya hai na kanya...main ne us waqt mobile par date aur time check nahi kia...xactly kitne baje main tumse pyar...mujhe kuchh yaad nahi aa raha hai....u know that's not important...(and smiles at kanya)
kan:RANBIRRRRRRRRR...
ran:dheere..dheere...agar wapas behosh ho gayi na...toh meri toh jaan hi nikal gayegi...aur phir tum safeed saree main nanda house jaogi.....mom tumhe doosri shaadi ke liye force karengi....soch lo..
kanya is in tears.....
ran:arre main toh mazaak kar raha tha...
kan:tum kehte ho na tumhe mera rona accha nahi lagta...jhooth bolte ho...tum har waqt mujhe rulate ho....
ran: (hugs her tightly)...arre arre...main mar kar bhi tumhara pichha kaha choorne wala hoon....bhoot banke tumko har din pyar karunga..promise..........
kan:U r really impossible....main mom ko sab kuchh bata doongi...
ran:bataoge...mom ko bataoge...yeh bataoge ki mom ranbir ne mujhe yahan kiss kia(kisses her cheek) ranbir ne mujhe bahut pyar kia..(kisses her neck)..ranbir ke saath main ne sahi maene mein iss bar honey moon manayi....aur mujhe accha bhi laga...(kisses her lips..)
kan:ranbir...chooro na...mujhe neend aa rahi hai.....mujhe chakkar aa raha hai..(ranbir suddenly becums tensed and leaves her.....and kanya winks her eyes...laughes loudly and prepares for sleeping.....ran too smiles...is blushing too...suddenly kanya turn back and kisses ran in his cheek...smiles..)..GOOD NIGHT....mr.romantic nanda...
kanya smiles and goes to sleep....
ranbir too smiles and says gud night.
in the midnight.....kanya is fast asleep....but ran stays awake....he thinks about the nat form of kanya.....
ran: (speaks to himself) aisa kya hua tha isske bacchpan mein ki yeh sweet si kanya natasha ban jati hai...aur yeh natasha hai bhi kaun.....kya rishta hai kanya ke saath natasha ka.....mujhe pata lagana hi parega...kissiko toh yah baat main bata bhi sakta.Mujhe jald se jald us investigating team ko rokna hoga....par main bataunga kya unhe...kyun rok raha main unhe....kuchh samaj nahi aa raha....OMG!! yah sab mere kanya ke saath hi kyun hona hai...
ranbir is utterly upset...suddenly his phone rings..
ranbir:hello..
pooja(on the phone): Sorry to disturb u ranbir...woh mujhe tumhe kuchh batana tha...tum hai na aapna aur kanya ka khayal rakhna....kya haina humare investigating team ko pata chala hai ki natasha ..wahi kahi par hai....woh tumhe kuchh bhi kar sakti hai..
ranbir:kyaaaa?????
pooja: ..and we r sorry lekin jab tum lapatta hua the archie ke saath to tumhe maza chakhana ke liye humne nat ko mail kia tha...so ranbir u must take care.
ran:Ok!!
ran keeps the phone and luks utterly tensed.
..........episode ends.................................

lonly

ranya u soo cheater yeh kahani maine pehle kahi sona ta lolzzzzzzzz

tum jante ho yeh kahani DIL MIL GAYE ........aarman vs ridhimaa

HEYY BABY

that is really gr8t u guys r doing a really great job...
thanks for this
plzzzzzzz some1 continue..

ranya

lonly...plz don't mind but i hav never even seen a single episode of DILL MILL GAYYE .by da way the romantic scenes r almost similar......so may b sumtime whatever ur so called armaan and ridhima have had similar scenes.and off course we always say u guys to continue ...plz read the posts...it says we really want innovation.

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mannie1

OMG i just love the new version of KIT. I would also like to continue because i have a great idea on wat could happen next.

mannie1

if u dont mind can i also write please? i think the idea i have might be prettey interesting.

kanyakumari

Ranya dear don't mind if someone says sumthing. we r enjoying our version ... so continue.after all it's for time pass!!!
anyway if lonly feels u copied from sum other serial ( by the way i have never heard of that serial) i would say Ekta copied frame to frame from our romantic version ... did u see today's episode 22nd may? the scene bet Ran and Kan.... holding her, lifting her chin....looking into her eyes.... Kyon bhai Lonly don't u think it was straight from our version.....Ha Ha ha !!!! long and short of story.... all M & B s r like these... one has to feel from heart!!!!

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kanyakumari

Mannie , sure pl continue. Just keep the format similar. I mean... more of dialogues and less of story telling. that gives more visual impression!!!

already 6 episodes r over. now it will be 7th. just stick to that there r 2 parts: break ke pehele and break ke baad.
as far as possible stick to Hindi... we try to keep the dialogues more like original Ran and Kan to have the feel!
always keep the link with the previous! refer to the previous episodes and refer to the original Ekta's KIT old episodes!

the version is ROMANTIC!!!! so be romantic , feel romantic.... write romantic!!!!
No adult jokes and vulger matter!!

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xoxo_angeldevil_xoxo

i agreeee...... btw i duunnno alot about dill mill gaye since it comes on at starone n i liv in us soooo i dont have everysingle channel but it seems peeps on utube r crazy about it!

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mannie1

I would love to also take part so if you dont mind I would like to start next episode. Her it goes:

ranbir is tensed and cannot sleep. on the other side at the godboles:

pammi: suniye kanya ka papa, mujha belkol hio nein need ayrahi. mujha to yei daar kya jaar ha ke kanya kaisi ho gi. agar jammi raga ko pata chalgeye ki kanya hi natasha ha, tu kua ho gaya. agar waha natasha ne ranbir ko marni ki kosis ki, to kya ohga?
anand: chinta tu mujha be hain, lekin kabi na kabi tu saach samne ahga. agar abi waha ranbir ko pata chalgeye tu shaid his hisme be kuch ahca hi ho, magar bene chaata kah saachi is tara sa samne ayi.

the phone rings and pammi goes picks it up.
pammi: hello, jammi raja?
ran: ji pammi the mammi.
pammi: kya oya? itne raat ko phone kiya, kuch parasna hoin ke baat to nein?
(anand and paami exchange glances and anand turns the speaker on)
anand: hello, ranbir kanya to tik aye.
ran: is waqt kanya belkol tik aha aur soorhi hain. lekin aaj jab hum ek club me
gaya ta to kanya kucj ajbi se behave karn laki. is tara se baat ki ke jasi whoe natasha hain. aur jab mein apni ek doctor dost ko phone kiya, hoosne kay ki ye HYPOGLYCEMIA ke symptoms lag te hain. kya app is bara mein kuch jann te hain?
pammi & anand: KYA!!!
pammi: jammi raja who kya hain ki....
ran:... kya kanya hi natasha hain. me ye baat kap se jaanta hoin lekin kabi visswas hi nayi kara.
anand: kya? apko ye baat bot dair se path hain. phir apni huch kya kyonni.
ran: yaad ha ki jaab me phali baar aya ta? tab room me kanya bal suck ariye te aur main hoske gardan mein who black spot dekliya ta. aur jab kanya jab faint ho gayi te to doctor haya ta aur app huinse kanya ke bamarhe ka baar mein baat kar reya tai tu mein saab kuch soone liya tai. likin aja mujha jakar pura barosha ho hay ke kanya such much mein narasha hay. isli mani who vitamin pills apni saat leiya li. abi main who whose nenid meh diya hain.
pammi: (in tears) aur ye sab janta hoiye bi apna kanya ku ye saab bateya nain. app kanya se bout pyar ikar tein hain
ran: (laughs) pyar kar ta hoin te isiliya hi kanya ko kal ik doctor ke paas liker jara hoin. teke pammi the mammi and anand papa, ab ap bina fiker kiya sooja hya. good night.
pammi & anand: good night.

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in the morning...

ranbir is flipping omeletes and on the other hand making tea from a cookbook. kanya walks in and is very surprised.

ran: ( without lookin back says)gud morning my love.
kan: ahra tum kais paata chala jab te murda be ni?
ran: because I love u more than anything in this world. dekho me tumari liya tea baan ra hoin aur parantas be try kiya hai kyonki tum to vegeaterian ho na? soory agar tordi jal ke hain
kan: to meri pyaara sand mari bar mein bot kuch janta hein. aur suba suba ik special treat derha.
ran: bot kuch to nain likne torda bot to jaan ta hoin. (picks her up in his arms and places her on the kitchen counter) ye lo eat kiryo. (feeds with his own hands).
kan ( eats it and begins to cry)
ran: kya hoin runa kyo laga. agar acha nein to tok do. (about to throw the parantas, but kanya stops him and takes the panrantas from him and holds his hands in hers)
kan: nain ranbir. me isile runa legi tiya ka itne pyaar se bani aur kiliya gi paranta mein ajj ta to kya, shaid kisi be nain jaanam mein nain kaya hoonga.
each look into each others eyes for a long time.
ran: chale bot romance hoiya. ab nasata kar aur yaad ha na ke doctor kya pass be janna hain.
kan: tika likne mujha apna haat si breakfast karoya.

**comercial break**
excuse my hindi spelling please. if u guys liked it please tell me if not then i would try to come up with soething more better. sorry for ruining the entire romance mood.

xoxo_angeldevil_xoxo

hey, dont feel bad it was good. u r atempt as very nice n trust me wen i m gonna write over the weekend, u r gonna be like whoa cause i m not the best writer like u all but i will try n den see how it goes cause I DONT WANNA RUIN IT CAUSE U GUYS R VERY GOOD N HAPPY ABOUT DIS!

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kanyakumari

It's really good! i'll write break ke baad if no one picks up for sum time
Don't worry abt Hindi! It's good!

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