wiam

hallo guys..i'm new here..i realy love kit soo much..so will you please try to write it in english becouse i dont understand indian or ordu...thank you

EXOTIC_GUY

If i have a permission to continued your story..i would love too.i use to write down the imaginary story before. i would love to write it down , i dont know how good i am tho ..but i can continued the story from yours from the end...if i have the permission. of course it would take some time before i start but yes i am good with the hindi/English. also i would like to be contacted by u , if thats okay with u ..my id is Exotic_Roman80@yahoo.com (Name is RomaN). Lets see what i can bring up.

dony

Hey we would love you to continu! Kanyakumari who saterd and ended this said any1 can feel free to continu from wher she left off. Hope you come up wiv something interesting! tk cr

EXOTIC_GUY

Well in this case i will start from her end story..i already have the special episode of this which i will post it soon with some new dhamaaka. Anyway i will be able to post it every sunday or every friday if possible. and hope someone else is not writing...or let me know.

EXOTIC_GUY

KUCH ISS TARAH (2 Version) This Title now will be kuch iss Tarah 2 version of the show.


Recap: As u seen in a last episode of a Kanya-Kumari Series. Kanya Nanda Gives a Birth to a child, and Ranbir Nanda is very happy to see his own child in his Hand and gets Emotional.

Narrator: Ab Dekhte Hain Aage…

:Om Ganesha Hi Nam Ha:


Author Note: This story is a fiction and Pure Imaginary. In this story all characters are also imaginary and so the Episodes.

Intro: zSHARE - Intro.wav


Ranbir: Kanya mujhe aisa kyon lag raha hain ..iski aankhein meri jaisi hain…aur iska naak bhi ..
Baby: :::Making cute noises:::
Nurse: Mr. Nanda aap bache ko mujhe de di jiye…isko shower karana hain…aap baad mein khel na .
Ranbir: yeh koi khel ne ki cheez thodi hain..yeh to mera aankh ka tara hain.
Doctor: Hello Mr.Ranbir , How is everything going.
Ranbir: ::Laughs: yeh to mujhe aap ko pooch na chahiye , ke maa or bache kaisi hain .
Doctor: Well bache ko to aap ne dekh liya hain,Dono sahi salaamat hain. And also Healthy Bhi. don’t worry.. she will be awake soon. Meine thodi daawa likh di hain, aap counter se le shakte hain.
Ranbir: Thank u doctor ! …Tries to call Home…:::Ring 1: Ring 2 : and Cell Battery goes down . Ishko abhi hi jhana tha..ab ghar kaisi phone karunga…
Adi: RANBIR MERA BHAII!! Kaisa hain tu…Congratulation ..Aaj party ho jaye…baccha kahan hain.
Ranbir: Nurse ke pass hain aur kanyaa abhi soh rahi hain ..labor pain jada ho gaya hain to doctor ne daawa likhe di hain .
Adi: sab theek ho jayenga aur sun, sab log aah rahe hain. Waisi bohat sara traffic tha aur tu jaan taa hain Election chal raha hain. Aur yeh daawa ka prescription mujhe de de, mein leke ah atta hoon.
Ranbir: sits on chair opposite to kanya bed::: Touching Her hair: Sab theek ho jayenga.

FlashBack: Ranbir Lost in his past…:::Music Plays::: zSHARE - 7phere.wav

:::Ranbir N Kanya Taking Saat Pheres:::

:::::Music Stops:::

Adi: Knocks the door harder
Ranbir: Kiya Hogaya bhaiyaa…
Adi: kahan kho gaya hain tu mere BHAI>>>KITNA CHILA RAHA THA.
Ranbir: bas yuhii bhaiyaa wohh thodi si aankh lag gai...Shaddi ke din jo saat phere ka vachan diya tha…aaj 4th vachan pura kiya hain kanyaa ne..
:::Smiles:::


RANBIR HOME MANSION SCENE:::

Mallika: Arre Jaldi karo sab log…Kitna Time lagao ge Taiyaar hone mein ..uff Reva Hurry up..
Shanya: Uuuhhhh :::Cries:: Meri Sarriiiiiiiiiii phatti huvi.. :::Cries::
Naukar: :::wishpers to himself:: Aisi taiyaar ho rahe hain jaisi kisiki shaddi ho..
Pummy: Mujhe to bohat maan kar raha hain apne pote ko dekhne ko…
Anant: Sach…Mera bhi maan kar raha hain ..Bas tum jaldi se tayaar ho jao
Shanta: yeh chalo chalo gaadi chalu ho gai hain ..raaste mein nahin rookengi..
Shanya: kyon kyon nahin rukengi..hum log kiya bohat durr ja raha hain …
Shanta: yeh shani..jada cham cham mat kar ..:::staring at the stairs:::
Reva: Oooo Shantaa , Main kaisi Deekhti hoon..
Shanta: Ek dum gali ki bhoond (Pig) jaisi .(phattey kapde wali)
Reva: Ohh darling..ur sooo down market.
Shanta: chal ab angrezi mein chappar chappar mat kar..nahin to dungi ek kaan ke niche.

Hospital Scenes:::

Men 1: Chal chal jaldi kar…time nahin hain …
Men2: Sab Exit Bandh karde..koi jhana nahin paee..sab packed kar dena

:::Guns Firing::: WooSh…

:::Everyone running and screaming::::

Ranbir: Runs out of the room and sees whats happening. Bhiyaa yeh kiya ho raha hain ..
Adi: Patta nahin , lagta hain koi natak ka rehearsal kar rahe hain ,mujhe yaad hain mein aisa hi ek scene kiya tha apne movie mein. Naam tha Luto Baar baar. (Rob over n over).
Ranbir:aap ko mazaak ki paadi hain bhaiyaa…
Men1: abe shaane tujhe dikhai nahin deta yeh kiya ho raha hain …chal andhar ja room mein ..
Adi: Omg yeh log to terrorist lag rahe hain ..
Men2: THIS HOSPITAL IS HIJACK….:::FIRING::
Men1: Apne apne aadmi ko bhej de har Exit pe..aur top floor ko bhi bandh kardo..Koi andhar ya bhar na ja paeee…
Mens: Ji bhai kaam ho gaya samjo..
Kanya: :::Screams:::
Ranbir: Runs to Kanya , Kiya Huva kaniyaa.
Kanya: Mera baccha kaha hain ..aur yeh sab awaazein kiya hain..mujhe kuch samaj nahin ah raha hain..
Ranbir: yeh to bas…::In tense:: Kuch gundonein city hospital ko Hijack kardiya hain..aur hamara bachha nurse ke paas hain..sahi salaamat hain.
Adi: Kanya tum ghabaro nai …Hum hain na..kuch karta hoon. :::Calls Home from his Cell:::


Nanda Mansion Scene

Mallika: :ick phone up:: haan bolo aditiya..hum log kuch hi der mein poch rahein hain waha..
WHAT! YEH MEIN KIYA SUN RAHI HOON!
Reva: :::Turns the tv on::: OMG city hospital kisine Hijacked kar liya hain.
Pummy: ab kiya ho ga rabba…Meri bacchi ..aur jamai!
Anant: Sab theek ho jayenga ..bhagwan pe bharosa rakho .
Shanta: yeh sab ish reve ke baje se huva hain…Jaldi nikali to jaldi aah jhate hain…saand kahin ki.

:::everyone in Highly Tense:::


City Hospital OUTSIDE Scene

ACNEWS: Hi this is Kiran, aur aap dekh rahe hain (AC-channel News) Ke city hospital hijacked ho gaya hain . Yeh pata nahin chal raha hain ke inki kiya demand hain .
Ppl: Waisi dekha jaye to abhi election chal raha hain ..to yeh sab dhanga ho gaa jaroor.
Ppl2: yeh sab hamare lallo bhai ki galati hain , Jo hamare opposite pm ke sath fight kar rahe hain.
Ppl3: JAB TAK RAHENGE SAMOSE MEIN ALLO..TAB TAK RAHENGE HAMARE PM LALLO
JAB TAK RAHENGE SAMOSE MEIN ALLO..TAB TAK RAHENGE HAMARE PM LALLO

::eople chanting lallo names:::
City Hospital scene

Kaniya: Mujhe Bohat daar laag raha hain ranbir…:::Tears::
Ranbir: daro mat..mein hoo na tumhare sath…hamesha.. ::Cuddles with Kanya:::
Kanya: mujhe hamare bacche ki phikar ho rahi hain , kahin kuch ho na jaye ..
Ranbir: ::wipes Kanya Tears:: Kuch nahin ho ga Pagli..wohh sahi salamat hain .

:::Sirens Wailing:::

Com: :::Talks in Microphone: Mein commissioner Chadda bol raha hoon..Tumhari jo bhi Demands hain
Hum isko puri karne ke liye tayaar hain….Aap Hospital or Patients ko Shod do.(Let go all patients.

Police: Sir, hum ne har jaga pe police ka naka laga diya hain..yeh log bhag nahin paayenge.

Public: Screaming and yelling outside: :::Maharashtra Police Haye Haye::::

:::Riots:::

:::Police controlling the situation:::


End OF the 1 Episode of the Version 2 of Kuch Iss Tarah…

Next Episode will be followed on : 11/21/08



Written & Directed By : RomaN

Music By: >RAJ<

EXOTIC_GUY

By the way , if anyone is interested to be in the series..Let me know...i will try to put the character into which it fits in the story..Let me know which name u will like...Role u will like to be in (this is rare n might not be the same role..so i cant promise that). and what personality u will like to have for that character...Note: all characters are for special appearance or in dynamic Role. So if u would like to see Ur self as imaginary character let me know in a private messages or in here ..as u feel..Good luck. and post your opinion about the version 2 . First episode.

Seekshah

wow guys thats simply great!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the writer has good brain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i just love it!!!
I wish if ekta could get such a good brain and imagination!!!!
btw why dnt u go to her!!!In all her serials she has always shown akashdeep in a negative role i think its high time for her to redress............

btw am also posting stories on KSBKBT plz visit the following threads if you wanna know about Eklavya and KT's love story!!
stay tuned and plz post your comments and suggestions...

KSBKBT!!!continues...............(4)