aaminaman

hai friends, i am going to start a new ff on premeer. The story begins from where gayathri says prem to leave heer from his life and he does but along with heer meher also leaves juneja as preet says that if prem bhai leaves heer then meher should also leave this house as well.Both babuji or were unable to do anything towards both of their decisions and thus heer , meher and nihal left juneja house hey friends ill continue 2morow as i have notime plz leave your comments

sweetkitty

Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeee first of all tell me what u say that ur english is so poorrrrrrr and by the way ur story also porrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

snsravani

It seems good so far. Go on. can't wait to read your ff.

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FAMJH

yeh show

u should make ff

i wanted to read your ff

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luv4bb

nice story

dimples

It'll be interesting. Please do post as soon as you can.

LilyGurl

the brainstorm looks gud lets find out how itlllokk like in the real thing

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Rukhsana1995

i like it aaminaman.......so please continue......

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PREM & HEER/ HARSHAD & ADITI IS THE BEST JODI IN THE WORLD AND CHAHAT IS SUCH A CUTE DAUGHTER !!!!!!!!!!

nityatarlapally

great beginning..keep writing!

aaminaman

CHAPTER 1
so now heer , meher and nihal left juneja house but there was still a hope for heer and meher that they will be called back to juneja house . with that hope they waited for 2 weeks but no one came even babuji didn't come to visit them and they thought that they were really thrown out from the family . So they started to forget everything even though they tried to forget it they were not able to do it.

And oneday no one was there at home only heer was there
nihal had went to office and meher went to the market when meher came back after shopping she saw that heer was lying down on the floor . So meher was really panic that she took heer and went to the doctor.

AT THE HOSPITAL
Heer was taken to further check ups while meher gave a call to nihal and said that heer was taken to hospital and said to come there and now nihal also came . All the checkups were over and the doctor called nihal to say about the result , heer and meher were waiting outside. The doctor said to nihal that heer is pregnent but the doctor said that heer's body is so weak than she needs complete rest and that she should be revealed from all kinds of tensions and frustrations .

Nihal thought when doctor said this that if heer should be happy then prem should be with her and not only prem the whole family should be there with her and without them how can she be happy . With all these thoughts nihal came out and said to meher wat ever the doctor said meher was also glad to hear that heer di is pregnent but at the same time sad as noone else was not there for this happy moment
When heer knew that she is pregnent she was happy that gaya3's wish came true but prem and gaya3 is not there now when she became pregnent.
At the same time in juneja house babuji,kulrajand preet are in great confusion that what made gaya3 to do all these things they were in great confusion and thought they should find the reason for gaya3's change and should bring heer,meherand nihal back to the family
hey don't forget to comment say watever the problem is i will change it .
Bye

nityatarlapally

great beginning!!..i love it!..can't wait for the next part!

LilyGurl

thank u it is great

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snsravani

Hey, so far its so great. please continue soon. thankyou.

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luv4bb

great start.update soon

Rukhsana1995

it was great! pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue.......

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PREM & HEER/ HARSHAD & ADITI IS THE BEST JODI IN THE WORLD AND CHAHAT IS SUCH A CUTE DAUGHTER !!!!!!!!!!

SugaNspice

i liked it...
please update soon

FAMJH

it is so nice ff

plz continutesssssssssss

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aaminaman

Chapter 2
Now that heer is pregnent there's some happiness in maan parivaar but still they are not happy as juneja parivaar is not there with them. Nihaal is still thinking about what the doctor said to him about heer's physical condition he was thinking that if heer should be in a healthy way for that there's only one way that can be taken they have to leave this town and go somewhere else so that heer will forget what all happened so nihal tried to get a transfer to Mumbai.
Juneja House
Prem is restless as heer is not with him he is not able to do anything without heer and now he thinks that he should find a job so that he will be engaged in anything so that he can get rid of the memories but whatever he does he cannot forget heer like that. Now that babuji,kulrajand preet are trying to find out the change in gaya3 they are following her like anything like what she is doing , to whom and all she is talking like that .
As said earlier Nihal tried to get a transfer and he got a transfer and now nihal said to heer and meher that they are shifting to mumbai but heer and meher refused to go as they said that they cannot leave this town and go somewhere else but atlast they agreed as they know that thier brother will only do to their good and so they agreed . before leaving heer tried to make a call to prem informing him that they are going to mumbai and will not come back and she is pregnent but maya was the one who took the phone when heer said to maya that can you give the phone to prem so that she can talk with him but maya acted so well that she said to heer that prem dont want to talk with her and dont want to see at all. heer was really sad to hear it she hung up the phone and left to mumbai
At the same time there was a wicked smile in maya's face but there was someone else standing over the side and was listening to the phone call between heer and maya. After the phone call maya said to herself that' heer i know that if i give the phone to prem to talk woth you then surely prem will call you back so i cannot give you that phone to prem' . the person who was standind by the side was hearing all this . who will be that one?


Dont forget to comment please and also thanks for all your comments on my first chapter
bye

cassie

i am loving ur fanfic so far........its great keep it up......m waiting anxiously for da next part.....try to post it as soon as u can

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Harshad ROCKS...
Love PREM&HEER....their jodi is the best
ABHI&NIKKI another cute jodi

aaminaman

thanks cassie for your comment