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aaminaman · 07-05-2009, 05:54 AM

CHAPTER-8

Heer was shocked to see Prem standing in front of her.Prem with a cute smile on his face was so happy to see heer .Prem understood that heer was shocked to see him.Rohan and Anushka who saw prem remembers that it was the same person that they met at the restaurant but they didn't know why he came here and why mamma was shocked to see him so they went to heer to ask

Rohan:Mamma yahi hey woh ajnabi jo hum restaurant ne mile (sorry if there is any mistake in my hindi please forgive me i am not good in hindi as hindi is my 3rd lang)

Anushka :Lekin mamma why are you shocked by seeing him?

Heer who was shocked to hear it bented down to say whom he was .She said to them with tears in her eyes that it was thier father both Rohan and Anushka was so happy to hear it.Prem bented down and stretched his hands to give them a hug to thier kids Both rohan and anu went to him calling "Pappa" . They hugged for more than 5min and then prem gave a kiss to both of their cheeks heer was so happy to see the father and the kids together she was waiting for this moment tears were flowing from her eyes when she was seeing this.Rohan and Anushka has been waiting for this day to come they were so eaher to see their father whenever they ask about thier dad heer would say to them that he will come one and now it became true their father had come to see them and
thought that this was thier glorious day ever.

Heer who was now crying went near the window inorder to hide her tears.After spending some time with his kids he went near heer who was standing by the window.He went near her hold her hand and turned her face towards him and saw that she was crying he wiped her tears and said to heer to forgive him and said sorry but before he said the word sorry heer covered prem's mouth with her hands and said to her that it was not your fault and that he dont want to say sorry to her she had already forgiven him and was just waiting for him to come back.Prem was so sad as he heard his mother's word and left heer they both hugged each other and after some time they breaked thier hug and heer called nihal and meher and said that prem came back eventhough they knew the whole thing they were so happy as everything was solved between them.Before going to thier house in mumbai prem said to heer that he cannot take her and kids to juneja house now as he have to do something and then he said he will take them. They first went to the hotel were prem was staying took all his stuffs and went to thier eventhough the kids said that they need to go for shopping heer refused saying that let pappa take some rest and then they all can go out .

Meher was waiting for them to come and they reached the house prem was happy to see everything because he thought that nihal had took great care of heer and kids eventhough he was not there with them.Heer took prem to thier bedroom prem saw that it was the same as how they had planned when they thought of building a house the kids shown their rooms,toys and all things in the house the father and the kids.Then as promised heer said to them that they can go out so all them went for dressing up.Anushka wored a white frock and rohan wore a jeans and t-shirt , Heer wore a blue saree she was looking gorgeous int hat saree with matching jewellry it was one prem's favourite colour and prem wored a poloshirt and jeans.They all went for shopping and prem was spending all his time with heer and his kids the time which he lost for 3yrs.They came back at almost 11pm and rohan and anu had slept.

Heer took rohan and Prem took anu both of them took them to thier rooms and layed over there . Then both of them went to thier room.Prem didn't cared to look heer till now as he was busy with his kids but he only gave a glance to heer when she entered the room and he saw that she was looking beautiful in that blue with matching ornaments he couldn't take his eyes out from her .Heer was a like a magnet for him she was attracting him all through.Heer came and gave his kurta and when she turned to go back he just holded her hand and brought her near and then holded on her waist and then brought her face to face he was not able to control his feeling s towards her he kissed over her cheeks and slowly his lips found it's place in her lips At first the kiss was slow but soon it went deeper and deeper they kissed for more than 7min and just break it to get some air . He then came back to the original position and kissed her again passionately and thus they went to sleep. When they went to sleep also heer thought that this all not a dream because she was not able to believe that prem came back and by thinking that she went to sleep.

Sorry guys as i did not update it earlier actually my exams were going on and that's why i was not able to update .I thought of dedicating this part to sravani as she went but i am sad she wont able to read . Thanks for all your commets and for waiting patiently
i don't know when will i update the next part but i will update it asap[/size]

aaminaman · 07-05-2009, 09:27 AM

hi guys i have updated my next part sorry as it was late

FAMJH · 07-05-2009, 09:56 AM

thank a lots sister

nadini · 07-05-2009, 11:02 AM

hi aaminaman, i just read ur ff it's awesome!!! wow i cant believe dat our kis desh members are sooooooo talented!!!

pls continue da story....

PremHeer09 · 07-05-2009, 01:56 PM

omg awesome part
continue soon!!!!

sweetanu · 07-05-2009, 01:57 PM

bravooo aaminaman........u did a fantastic job....i was getting goose bumps whole through the story.........actually u brought out those feelings we want to hear here..............beautifully brought out........do continue experimenting with new stuff..........

Innocent02 · 07-05-2009, 02:11 PM

wao...Amazing....finally PREM WITH HIS KIDS !!! and ofcourse with hEER TO.

gr8 job!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks for updating

nityatarlapally · 07-05-2009, 03:56 PM

three cheers for you!!
the chapter was soo sweet!!..aww..heer is finally happy again!!
superb..fantastic..the wait was worth it!!
aww..sravani won't be able to read it..maybe she will once she reaches india!!..but if she did...she would have loved it!
update soon!!
~nitya

aaminaman · 07-06-2009, 05:08 AM

thanks guys for all your wonderful comments really a big thanks but i wish sravani would have also read it i actually dedicating this to her but i was not able to upload befor she left anyway thanks for all of you who liked my ff

cindy4 · 07-06-2009, 08:23 AM

Simply loved reading the ff ...3 cheers to you and many thanks....waiting eagerly for the next part....

nadini · 07-06-2009, 09:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aaminaman

thanks guys for all your wonderful comments really a big thanks but i wish sravani would have also read it i actually dedicating this to her but i was not able to upload befor she left anyway thanks for all of you who liked my ff

lets hope sravani reads ur ff cuz its fantabulous!!! im sure she'l love it!!!!

Heart_Broken · 07-08-2009, 08:14 AM

wow
that was simply amazing
sorry I was late to update but I went Holland for a couple pf days that is why
sorry
but it is a super update
fantastic
when I read it I was like wow I could not stop saying the word wow

PremHeer09 · 07-19-2009, 09:39 PM

please update soon

lightoftheworld · 07-20-2009, 05:18 AM

OMG !!! U write very well aaminaman !!! The reader gets into the story !!! And its not that easy to get the reader in the story ... but ur ones are so fluently ! I have to read some chapters ... but the one I read, they were fantastic !