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Old 10-08-2008, 05:41 AM   #1 (permalink)
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hi guys kaysaa hai yeah bandhan? is a story written with the same kasturi serial characters but in different way.read and comment

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PART-1

purushotham sabarwal: he is the multi millinor in delhi,owner of sabarwal group of industries.

kasturi sabarwal's Only daughter of purushotham.

girls other characters i will introduce as an when it come across.

in sabarwal house: morning 8 o'clock

purushotham: "m..a..a.ji" he came down from the steps calling her.maaji is kasturi's grand mother purushotham's mother-in-law

ramsigh the driver who was standing in the hall with his white uniform:maaji poojay mai hai.

puru:teek hai...ab chalo flight landing ho gayee.mai nay net pay check karliya hai....said to the driver

and he told one of his servents to tell maaji that he is leaving to airport to receive KASTURI.

on the way to airport puru was thinking about kasturi.she is the one and only daughter of him.waaris of sabarwal .she lost her mother when she was 5.As puru was busy with his business...kasturi was brought up by her grand ma.

today after compltion of her M.BA kasturi is returning from UK.by the time puru reached the airport ...kasturi finished her immigration clearance and came out of the airport..she saw puru standing along the crowed at the receiving end.puru looked at her with his eyes wide open...not only puru all other visitors too started staring at her...cuz...she is an amazing beauty...with a little sharp nose glittering eyes with well trimed eye brows..chubby cheeks..thin lips..she was wearing a lemon yellow printed sari in a very elegant way..which was flowing on her fair soft skin....with a matching sleeveless blouse...a very short and thick stright hair cut which just touches her ear..a simple single pearl earring.... a black leather strap watch in her left hand..a small single stone diamond finger ring in her left hand ring finger..no bangles..no chain.....about her make up ..a slight lip glass on her pink lip...which made her more attractive and sexy..this is what kasturi looks...

kasturi: 'd...a...d..'she had a fast walk and came near to him..puru became bit emotional..and gave her a warm hug.driver took her baggages... they walked towards the car.in the car'd..a..d' how is nanima? kasturi asked puru.

puru: ghar pay thumaari inthazaar karrahee hai.kasturi was asking so many Q to puru.puru was answering to all with a smile on his face.

when they reached sabarwal house maaji was waiting for her with aarthi...and she took the aarti for kasturi

nanima: 'yeah sab kya zaroori hai..' kasturi

maaji: tu chup kar ...mayri kasturi ko kisi ki nazaar naa lagay...chal andar aaw.
kasturi went inside ...spend some time with her nanima...and went to her room to take rest.she was relaxing for a week...to get rid of her final exam tentions... jet lag ..all those things.

a week went quit normal.after a week...puru , kastrui and maaji were on the dinning table.

maaji: jawaai ji...ab thum kasturi ko abna business mai laga tho...

puru: mai bhee yea hee sooch ra ha tha maaji..

maaji: sooch kya rahay ho...aab kya baadth kasturi ko hee business sambal na hai ..issi leayh tho kasturi ko M.BA kar na pada.

kasturi: nani ma ithnee bhee kyaa jalthee hai...

puru: kasturi business is not a easy joke..it will take time to get in to...it is better we start now..

kasturi: O...k...she said without any interest.

puru: chalo jalthee say thayaar ho jaawo...hum factory chalayngay..

kasturi: ji dad.

with in 15 min she got ready and came down.

puru and kasturi came to the factory.it is a textail industry ...which has 7 different units.puru took her to all the units and introduced the staff working there.

puru: this is unit 1.here they clean... segregate the cotten and make it ready for making in to thread.in say melo .yeah unit 1 kay chief engineer hai...mr.sharma'....puru introduced a 50 yead old man in a suit..she said hai to him...as soon as she entered the unit all the workers stop their work and started staring at her..

no need puru to introduce kasturi to them...cuz two weeks before it self puru told to all his employees in a meeting that his daughter kasturi is going to return from UK after her MBA...and will join office shortly.

puru introduced other workers too to kasturi...he moved on to other units one by one.

they reached unit 6

when they enter the unit all the workers stop their work and looked at her...except one....he was looking down keenly one of the mechinery...he kept his right leg little above on the machine and looking down ...kasturi stared at him from his back..he was wearing a white mundaa baniyaan(no sleeves)...which showed completely his strong and well build up mussles..slight sweat drops over that mussles made him more manly...

kasturi got bit annoyed about his act...

puru: kasturi insay melo he is...'ROBBIE'

as soon as he heard the voice of puru robbie turned towards him..

kasturi:..'.R..A..G..I'...even though she heard his name ROBBIE she said intentionally...

robbie stood stright and turned towards kasturi...he don't care to look at her..but she could not avoid looking at him...he is brown in colour..with sharp nose...thick eye brows ...brown sharp eyes..strong jaws..slightly thick lips...6 feet tall...his baniyaan was little bit wet even though the fan was running over his head...his face glitered with sweat..

when she saw his full fig she moved one step back....omg..he was...soo hot and hadsome...she should accepct that...but she don't want to...

robbie: 'goodmorning sir'...he neglected kasturi and wished puru..which made kasturi angry..
puru: kya howa..
robbie: chota sa problem tha machine mai..ab teek hogayeah hai..he took his blue thin striped white shirt from a person who was standing beside him holding his shirt and staring at kasturi.....he wore the shirt...put up the button and closed his wide slightly hary chest.

robbie: 'kumar...machine chaloo karo' robbie said while wiping greese from his hands...kumar the guy who was holding his shirt switched on the machine...it run smoothly..

puru: 'yeah kasturi '...he introduced her.

robbie did not acknowledged that.which added more anger to kasturi...so far she never met a guy who don't even care to look at her.she is such a beauty ...guys can't stop themselves to have a second look at her.

robbie:' sir kal...' he was about to say some thing

puru: 'kasturi in say melo...'he said second time to kasturi..

this time robbie canot avoid.he turned towards her..his face was expressionless. NO smile on his face...even for formality.

robbie:' hi mam' he said as if a stone man was taking.

mam kay bachhay...i will see you later....iss MACHANIC ko ...i have to see him..she said in her mind with a false smile on her face.




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wow........lovely FF ...i am reading first time a FF in this forum.excellent creation. i love each and every bit of it.robbie is a mechanic????? omg...he cant be...waiting for your next part.
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are u gonna keep on going! i love it
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wow........lovely FF ..thank u...i am reading first time a FF in this forum.o..i see excellent creation. i love each and every bit of it thank u again.robbie is a mechanic????? omg...he cant be...waiting for your next part.
yep i am going to post my next part soon
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are u gonna keep on going! i love it thank uthanks
if there is a good responce and people like it i will surely continue
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PART-2

kasturi don't want to spent much time in unit 6...with a 'h...i' to robbie she moved on to unit 7.the factory was on the ground floor ...offices on the first floor.puru took her to the first floor to show her office. all the officer's cabins were on the left hand side .on the right hand side cubicals were arranged for asistants staffs both ladies and gents to sit.the officers cabin's front walls were made up of transparent white unbreakable fiber so that they can see their staffs working from their respective places.

puru opened one of the newly furnished cabin ...

puru: "kasturi yeah hai thumhaara cabin..."...she really liked it cuz it was neatly furnished with her favorite colour baby blue.

puru: "i have some work to do in my office..mai thum say baad mai mil tha huon." he went.kasturi slowly went and sat on the revolving chair...she was very very tired both physically and mentally.'uufff...'yeah office sambhaal na koi aasaan kaam nahee hai...nanima teek kahaa tha' she was worried .she don't have the mood to look in to any files.she raised her eyes to see the time on the wall clock...it was 4:15 pm.omg...she did not expect that it will be 4:15pm...so fast the time went...the office hours was from 9am to 5pm..1pm to 1:30pm lunch break.saturday half a day for assistants staffs and holiday for officers.

she want to leave the office ...she stood up from the chair...her body was aching cuz of the stress...she walked out of her cabin.while she was passing by her next cabin...she was surprised to see through the glass wall the 6 feet man standing in side the cabin showing his back to her...searching some thing from the cabinet....'omg...this back is familier to me'...the same blue thin striped white shirt...build up body...yes the same KHADOOS MACHANIC...she became wild...she forcefully pushed the door and enterd in...

kasturi: yeah...you...MACHANIC...what the hell u r doing here??her words and voice were sooo rude...

he was till searching in his cabinet...don't even bothered to turn towards her...

kasturi: i am asking u ? don't u have the MANNERS to reply??? her pitch was high.

robbie took out the file from the cabinet and turned towards her....

robbie:'i hope u know the same MANNERS to get the permission before u enter in to my office...'he said in a very slow tone

kasturi: my office??? what do u mean by my office!!!!...she shouted in a low voice...

before robbie say some thing to kasturi he saw a man standing near the door...'araay shankar ram ji...andher aayeah..." he walked towards his table ...and kept the file on the table.

shankar ram: 'sir aaj shaam ka mayraa permission..' yesterday itself he asked half an hour permission to go home early today to celebrate her 8 years old daughter's birth day.

robbie: wo tho mai kal hee sanction kar diyaa...aap ghar chaleyeah..aap ke bayti inthazaar kar thee ho gee..
when he was about to go "ek minute"...said robbie ... took his black purse from his pant side pocket ...removed 3 hundred rupees bill and gave it to shankar ram.." bayti kay lieah kuch gift ghareeth kay thay naa mayri tharaf say.."

shankar ram: rahanay do na sir... aap nahee aayean gay...?" before robbie could answer him.." i was going on asking u ...u don't have the manners to answer me...what are u doing in this office..??'again she raised her voice.

shankar ram got surprised to see her questioning robbie..

shankar ram: "mam...yeah tho inka office hai...robbie sir unit 6 kay executive engineer hai...inkay neechay thakreeban soow workers kaam karthay hain...cabin kay baahar robbie sir ka name board laga huwaa hai.aap nay nahee thayghay?" said very politely

kasturi taken aback with shankar ram's reply...suddenly her face became red...she couldn't speek...walked out with the same forced she entered...

shankar ram looked at robbie sadly..robbie read his face...

robbie: aap fikar math kariyeah...foreign return ladkiyaan aisay hee hothay hai..ghuth ko bahuth hosheeyaar samachthay hai...aap jalthee ghar jaayeyeah aur bayti ka birth day manaayeah..

shankar ram: aap nahee aayean gay....

robbie: oh...sorry...muchay kal kay seminor kay leah prepare kar na hai...

shankar ram went out...robbie came back to his seat and started doing his work as if nothing happend...
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i hope u guys liked it.if so please comment on it...that will help me to write better.
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Shumi you are a great writter
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I love it i think u should continue...there r not alot of reply's but i think when people read it they will surely reply....but for right now plzz continue
once again i love ittt.....plzzzzzz continue
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part -2

omg....fantastic...i knew that he may not bre a mechanic.please up date next part too.
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Shumi you are a great writter thank u sooo much...

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I love it thank u i think u should continue.i will..there r not alot of reply's but i think when people read it they will surely reply..inshallah..but for right now plzz continue
once again i love ittt..thank u...plzzzzzz continue
posting my next part now.
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part -2

omg....fantastic..thank u .i knew that he may not be a mechanic. u r right please up date next part too.
going to post now.
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PART3

even though kasturi came home early she was very tired.she went stright up to her bed room and fall on her round bed... covered with dark blue satin spread.she don't even feel like refreshing herself.her head was still aching.
she started thinking about her first day of office.immediately robbie flashed in her mind...'ufff...omg...he is...??? this head ache is cuz of him only...but what did he do?she started thinking about him....she never come across such type of guy in her life.he is the first man who don't even care to have a look at her... in her university guys from first year to final year were dieing to have a glance of her.she never met a person who crossed without saying hi or atleast a smile to her.

It is her fault that she expected the same from him..it is her fault she under estimated him ....it is her fault she stormed in to his office without permission......' she never knew when she slept...she was not aware that her nanima and dad came to her room to call her for dinner.

when she woke up it was morning 7 am.she felt much better.she don't have the habit of bed tea...she stright away went to wash room.by 8am she was on the dinning table for her break fast.

kasturi:goodmorning nanima,goodmorning dad..

nanima:'thum teek tho ho na kasturi ? shayad kal bahuth thag gaye thee.'said with concern.

kasturi: haan...nanima..thodaa saa...

puru: kasturi today 3pm we have a seminor by our engineers.this was arranged exclusively for u...to know more about our company.

kasturi: ji dad i will be there in time.

before she leave the house she decided never to cross that kadoos robbie.but she never knew she is going to fall for him.

office:

she did not come out of her cabine till 3pm.At 8 to 3 she got up from her seat ...walked towards the meeting hall which was at the other end of her office.while passing she involuntarily turned towards robbie's office...it was empty..all the officers rooms were empty...when she entered the meeting hall all the engineers were present.the ovel shaped table was neatly arranged with bisleri water bottels , tissu paper boxes etc.

as soon as she entered all the engineers stood up and wished her...she accepted their wishes by wishing them back with a cute smile...her eyes searched for him...whom she want to keep away...he was missing.'he was neither in his cabin nor in the meeting room..' the thought flashed in to her mind...

she was wearing a dark blue mysore silk sari with golden yellow tiny flower designs on it , with short sleeves matching blouse.all the engineers eyes who were in forties and fifties focused on her.

by 3:05pm puru entered the hall with a 'sorry' for his delay...along with...ROBBIE...

the meeing started with a small introduction and went on smoothly.the engineers explained their units and their products one by one..kasturi was taking notes and some time questing them too.when the unit 6 turn came...kasturi turned towards robbie...robbie started with a introduction...his unit was doing designing and printing..he explained how they design it ...how it finally goes for printing...he showed all his up coming designs with a power point slid show..which was very impressive.kasturi could not take off her eyes from him...she was looking at him with her eyes wide open.he was standing near the white screen... pointing at the screen and explaining. he was looking at the engineers while explaining.he was wearing white plain shirt... black coat over the shirt, no tie...with a slight, trimed one day stubble...he got a big applause at the end of the meeting." he has stuff and he is talented" kasturi said to herself.

after the meeting one by one dispersed...puru huged robbie and said ' weldone my boy ' he patted on his back while hugging.kasturi was standing and collecting her files from the table. ' robbie...u know... kasturi is back home after 2 yeras. so today we have a small gathering at home...u have to be there in time..."

robbie: 'sir...o mai...' he was trying to say some excuse.

puru: no 'NO' u r going to be there.

kasturi was woundered...it is a family gathering..y dad is inviting him? she was confused...

in the evening:

sabarwal house was decorated with serial lights and flowers.it was purely a family gathering.all her relatives were gathered togeather.kasturi was in blue jeans and baby pink lose top,slightly heeled sandals...with short silky hair cut ..cute thin lips shining with lip glass she was looking absolutely attractive..she was going around and having fun with her cousins.

puru: 'thank u so much robbie for u r presence'

kasturi who was talking to her cousin turn towards the direction where from the voice came.she saw puru hugging...same back pose ...same 6 feet masculine man....she forcefully turned her eyes off from him and continued with her cousin.few minutes later she saw him talking to one of her cousin brother..now she can see his front pose...he was wearing blue jeans with olive green T-shirt with words on his chest...she was trying to read it but couldn't...she can see his belt buckle just above his Tshirt..He was looking absolutely different from yesterday.yesterday he was in suit with stubble .today he was in jeans and T shirt with clean shave.her cousin was holding a drink in his hand and talking to him...but his hands were empty.

kasturi:'nandu kaka' she called sabarwal house cook who was serving drinks to others.

kasturi: 'give him drinks' she pointed robbie

nandu:' kisko?...robbie sir ko!!! wo tho drinks nahee peethay...' his answer made kasturi to think.'how nandu knows about him? that means he is not new neither to sabarwal house nor to sabarwal party.the way he casually mingled with his relatives proved that.

kasturi: 'go and give him coke ' she showed her anger on nandu..

nandu looked at her helplessly.which made kasturi to turned towards robbie...she found him missing.
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oh....my sweety...u r here?
yeah i have been here for a long time and i visit ac daily. I love your ff so i had to comment.
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